Props:
Headphones.. one small, one
big
Note pad and pen to write bars
Cast needed : ashad, one girl
and one bully
Ashad plays the character who is trying to improve his
rapping skills, whilst he is still learning there is a bully who keeps teasing
and laughing at him
There is a girl who ashad seems to have a connection
with and they keep locking eyes. he wants to get better at rapping to impress
her, when the bully pushes ashad a tears his headphones ashad's crush then comes
across and gives him her bigger and better ones and this inspires him even more
to get better at rapping.
He goes away and works hard to improve, we will
show various situations where he is trying his best to master his craft.
eventually he manages to become very good, the bully admits this and gives him
some respect then he gets the girl (she comes across and hugs
him)
Traditional storyline where the underdog rises up, becomes
successful and gets the girl.
Detailed:
We have had an
idea/storyline change, we have moved a bit away from the young boy and older
version of boy being successful, the idea now is similar but with something we
felt was better to the overall video and something much more
practical.
The new idea change is, we will have our fellow group member
Ashad performing all the storyline shots and this is where the change is. It
will be Ashad playing a character who is trying to improve and than be
successful with his rapping skills. Also his motivation is slightly a girl who
he has a bit of a connection with and a bully who teases him and generally is
very down putting. Although in this case the bully will determine him to be
better at rapping and will use this as a method to show the bully who he is a
person and that he wont stand for it but, with this slightly impressing the girl
as well.
A proposed idea to show part of these ideas, is a scene
where Ashad is put down again by the bully literally with a push and in this his
headphones rip or break, with this the girl makes a move to Ashad for
determination and gives her better pair of headphones to him. In a way this is
his ignition to really be inspired and work hard and become what he wants to be,
a rapper.
After a while we will have a few cut-aways and show the progress he
is having, with a few shots showing the struggle as well as the progress, for
these there will be various situations but eventually he does become good
at rapping and is successful, the bully is than forced to accept this and shows
him the respect he deserves and just like the classic endings he ends up
actually getting the girl.
The storyline part of the video should finish
with the girl giving a hug to Ashad and him knowing that he has gone through
being bullied and struggle of rapping to know being successful, being given
respect and of course gets the girl.